Seventeen Seconds, Anywhere To a Silver Cloud



Running about the constellations,
with poetic ruminations.
Bouncing off planets gravity free
All I can romantically ponder.verily,
Is simply,you and me!
In a heavenly garden of our own.
With us both in wreaths of flowers
Inside an opalescent, shining tower.
Truly, I want no more than this,
To live in your impassioned kiss.

But when that hour comes and death
approaches, I entreat thee, love of
my days,
Save me from this human kingdom!
Our planet worried about animals and
plants, while they, their human-selves 
do happily destroy, a baby??

My love! I fear I will rot in a loveless
world with only ice cold faces.
Absent eyes and vacuous heads.
Sentences we spoke on the condemned
list!
Too many words, ruination,
We never spoke in heiroglyphics!
Please bring me home to thee,
Where rivers of words overflow their
banks, amorously.
Oh, how I await  and desire thee!

Eternally your,
Panagiota

5/13/2019
5:30am PST
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Kiser Avatar
May 14, 2019 at 7:16 AM
I love the beginning of this poem; believe it or not, I think you can add more; great images that flood the imagination with food for thought.
Romios Avatar
May 14, 2019 at 7:44 AM
Thank you. Am not great at imagery.sorry. I'm really honed in on exppanding words that set the soul on fire. Guess they do not count, You and Andrea are masters with imagery. I am just A punk and a slow learner.))))PR PR.This is month two here. How long have you been writing! Panagiota
Dietrich Avatar
May 13, 2019 at 3:16 PM
I love the passion you bring to your poetry! Nice use of metaphors. thanks for your recent beautiful comments at my poetry.
Romios Avatar
May 13, 2019 at 3:23 PM
Andrea, it's absolutely true what I said about you.)) I' m not even aware when I am using metaphors. I am aware of trying to find Thd right words. Our language is a plethora of beauty. Why not use it? Panagiota
Wolf Avatar
May 13, 2019 at 1:33 PM
Interesting blend of themes. I'd like to think that while we can't insulate ourselves from reality, we can conduct ourselves in a way which ultimately creates a better one! (Am I a dreamer, or what?!) :) gw
Romios Avatar
May 13, 2019 at 1:40 PM
Thank you. Deep thought you have Appreciatively, Crazy in CA, Panagiota
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
May 13, 2019 at 11:12 AM
Yeah, abortion sucks man, a great rhyme Panagiota!, Aloha wk
Romios Avatar
May 13, 2019 at 11:30 AM
I can tell how much you love kids! Canada murdered 4 million since 1969. That's so honorific, now the want Euthanasis for all! I saw them here in Ca trying to snuff my mother out. I fought the MDs tooth and nail. All participating may burn in hell,Murder is murder is murder, Appreciate your stand and visit Panagiota
Warrior Avatar
May 13, 2019 at 10:17 AM
Well crafted Panagiota...love has many realms...happy loving...^WW^
Romios Avatar
May 13, 2019 at 10:55 AM
I see a typo in there and do apologize. What do I know of realms? Not much,-)) I do hope heaven is a place where full sentences are welcomed and there is no multi- tasking madness and Emojis are bound for hell. In heaven,we can be fully human again. Panagiota. Thank you WW!
Krutsinger Avatar
May 13, 2019 at 8:28 AM
A glorious reminder that another world exists between two lovers who can escape the horribleness of reality in their wonderful togetherness.
Romios Avatar
May 13, 2019 at 8:43 AM
Exactly! Let me fly to him, please? Thanks and a scrumptious day be yours!
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