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Seventeen Is the Lucky Number

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In the aura of love my heart hinders, All that is left is my strength of sorrow, Where livid lamenting turns to cinders… Veneration embracing the morrow. Like a weeping willow my tears cascade, Over ten thousand years will come to pass… My thoughts of you slowly fearfully fade, Only the strength of sorrows keep their mass. Incidental idyllic illusions, Falling upon my magniloquent mind… Amidst woeful weakness of seclusions, Stagnant statues of sorrows left behind. Within a state of submissive supine, An empath of love where sorrows confine. Strength of Sorrow…Theme 10 Syllables per line July.26.2019 17 is the Lucky Number - Rhyme Poetry Sponsored by: Lu Loo Background music by... Two Steps From Hell 'Heart of Courage' Thomas Bergersen Invincible 2010 With male virtual voice Placed 1'st...Thank You

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Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/8/2019 11:41:00 PM

Your poetry carries me away into the mystical magic of your words. This is stunning and certainly deserving of your First Place honor WW. I must Fave this wonderful piece. Congratulations! : ) xxoo

Jeanne Mcgee

Date: 8/5/2019 8:47:00 AM

Incidental idyllic illusions...love this phrase. Congrats on your win with this beautiful piece.

Lu Loo

Date: 8/4/2019 2:50:00 PM

you never cease to amaze me sweet WW...blessings- thank you for your participation and congratulations on your win. :)-luloo

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 7/27/2019 2:07:00 PM

Exquisite my dear friend - I absolutely love your poems - each one with your stamp of talent and creativity - Imagery at its best -good luck in the contest, Hugs, Jenn.

Jeanne Mcgee

Date: 7/27/2019 12:13:00 PM

This is poetry written at it's best..."stagnant statues of sorrows left behind" a winner for sure

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/27/2019 6:39:00 AM

- This poem indicates an elevation of positive illusion in the end, W.W. ... love it :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

CayCay Jennings

Date: 7/26/2019 10:10:00 PM

EXCELLENT writing - gave me that poetry adrenaline high that I love so much! Profound laid down in intoxicating imagery. I must FAV because I want to have what I want when I want to have it, especially when it gives me such rushes! Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Alexis Y.

Date: 7/26/2019 9:53:00 PM

Hi WW, The voice reciting your poem did your poem justice. It caused an already amazing piece to go on another level. Great use of the giving words. I'm in awe of your gift. I wish you the best of luck luck in the contest. Have a great weekend my friend:-) Alexis

Arturo Michael

Date: 7/26/2019 12:51:00 PM

Outstanding presentation...a Gothic feel it it...mystical....