Seventeen Is the Lucky Number

Set out on hope to build idyllic life in an impaired world swept by storm of strife, wandered with heart’s bowl with dregs of empath, sense of veneration lost on rough path. Mind became fragile in grip of weakness, broke supine dreams, stowed in wasteland recess. Lamenting harsh time making life fallow, enmeshed in calm clasp of weeping willow. Ten long years I weathered the wild winter till I had incidental encounter with you, aura of sun glowed, I could see, within your warm heart would you shelter me.
July 18, 2019 Syllable count : 10 each line (checked on howmanysyllables.com) Contest : 17 is the Lucky Number Sponsor : Lu Loo Theme chosen : Shelter Me
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Mcgee Avatar
August 5, 2019 at 8:56 AM
Love the last line of salvation. Congrats on your win.
Scars Avatar
August 4, 2019 at 2:53 PM
great poem sweet Subimal, really enjoyed it ;) thank you for your participation and congratulations on your win. :)-luloo
Rodrigues Avatar
July 18, 2019 at 6:24 AM
A shining moment...and so life begins!
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