Caren Krutsinger Poet Rhyme

Seventeen Is the Lucky Number

Lamenting sadness of my empath soul 
Ten supine feelings hit me hard and whole. 
The weeping willow of my heart so fine
Incidental weakness is truly mine.
My sweet soul feels bliss of veneration
A heart-felt idyllic situation
I can see auras around every soul. 


Written July 9th, 2019
Contest: 17 is the Lucky Number
Theme Chosen: Shelter Me
Sponsor: Lu Loo
Syllable count: 10 each line. Checked with www.howmanysyllables.com

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Connie Marcum Wong August 8, 2019 at 11:55 PM Wow Caren! I love what you did with these words. This is a favorite for me! Congratulations on your deserving high placement! : ) xxoo Caren Krutsinger August 9, 2019 at 8:53 AM Thank you Connie. I worked a 12 hour day yesterday - 7 hours at one school, and Meet the Teacher night at the other. Had no idea I even placed.

Jeanne Mcgee August 5, 2019 at 8:52 AM I'm not sure how I missed reading this one before...what a lovely take on the contest words. Love it very much. Congrats on your win. A fav. Caren Krutsinger August 5, 2019 at 6:04 PM Thank you Jeanne. You usually see all of my stuff. Must have clicked one too many.

Beautiful Scars August 4, 2019 at 2:52 PM I love where you took the theme- great job sweet Caren:) thank you for your participation and congratulations on your win. :)-luloo Caren Krutsinger August 4, 2019 at 5:57 PM Thank you so much! I had fun with this. It was a great challenge Lu Loo. I trust you will do another contest!

Sandra Adams July 15, 2019 at 9:29 PM I have been called an empath before. I think it’s just that I am good at reading people that I sense their sadness! You did a nice job with the challenge! Good luck in the contest :) hugs Caren Krutsinger August 4, 2019 at 5:58 PM Being good at reading people is what an empath does best! It is the biggest compliment. What could be better?

Kim Rodrigues July 10, 2019 at 9:49 AM I have the gift of discernment and have felt what someone was feeling even when they were not yet in eyesight! God’s gift from my childhood. Caren Krutsinger July 10, 2019 at 7:57 PM It is a wonderful trait to have some days, and a gift I imagine you wish you could put down others. Am I right?