Seventeen

Tell me, can you tell that I'm only seventeen weary seventeen
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Andresen Avatar
April 20, 2012 at 5:33 AM
Sweet seventeen ! Well done haiku Rachel. - Have a lovely day. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Peranteau Avatar
April 19, 2012 at 7:08 PM
Well dear poet; I'll have to read more of your writes sometime, and I'll get back to ya with an opinion ! *smiles* Have a wonderful week Rachel....much love, james
Pickett Avatar
April 19, 2012 at 4:31 PM
Oh those days have long since'd past for this gentleman but I do rather the journey back through your words. Nice Haiku Rachel!..:JP]
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April 19, 2012 at 4:32 PM
"I do rather enjoy the journey back."
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