Sevenbits--Diary

Widowed Dad zested for life,
Every day new adventures:
Hiking in the Sierras,
Naked white-water rafting,
Hours of gambling in Tahoe,
Dates with beautiful women...

Then married his best friend, Mike.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Adams Avatar
October 4, 2017 at 10:41 PM
OMG, I love it. I wasn't expecting that at all. Another FAV. Well done!!
Cozart Avatar
October 5, 2017 at 7:53 AM
Thanks a lot, Pat!!
Rodrigues Avatar
October 4, 2017 at 6:17 AM
Quite the twist. Good one.
Vacek Avatar
October 3, 2017 at 11:47 AM
Unexpected twist in a nicely penned 7x7.
Cozart Avatar
October 3, 2017 at 11:54 AM
Thanks, Michael.
Vaso Avatar
October 2, 2017 at 10:47 PM
LOL so funny, I wasn't expecting that ending! :)
Cozart Avatar
October 3, 2017 at 8:46 AM
Thanks, Arthur!
Cresswell Avatar
October 2, 2017 at 10:21 PM
Great twist sometimes true love is right under your nose.
Cozart Avatar
October 3, 2017 at 8:46 AM
Thanks, Patricia!
Pandit Avatar
October 2, 2017 at 6:47 PM
That last line does the job..!
Allison Avatar
October 2, 2017 at 4:56 PM
Oh I love the twist at the end Dale - I chose diary too, good luck in the contest!:-) hugs jan xx
Cozart Avatar
October 2, 2017 at 5:39 PM
Thanks, Jan, you, too!!
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