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Seven Things I Would Save If My House Was On Fire

You ask if my home caught on fire and I only have sixteen minutes to gather those things that I treasure; what seven things would I hurriedly carry off with me. The first thing I would rush for, would be my husband's pillow. I hold it tightly when I go to bed to have him close. To remember the times, I would look into his eyes and taste his lips, to hear his heart beating with mines once again. The second thing I would rush for, is a briefcase, I keep all our important papers, special small mementos and collectibles that I keep of my children. The third thing I would rush for, would be my reading glasses. The fourth thing I would rush for, would be my cell phone and call 9-1-1 after leaving the property. The fifth thing I would rush for, would be my handbag with my wallet and of course some of my cosmetics, brush, aspirins, allergy pills, EpiPen, Tums. The sixth thing or things I would try to carry out would be, as many of my oil paintings that I've painted and kept in my own collection; to me, are irreplaceable. The seventh and the last would be, my husband's collection of Seraphim Angels by Roman or at least one. The angels meant the world to him. He would say the angels always made him feel a warmth inside him. Take my car out of the garage. It is really hard to put a value on some things. What is really important? A fire is disastrous, and as little as two minutes, a house fire can turn into a rapid movement and life-threatening disaster. 2/5/2019 Poetry Contest :Seven Things You Would Save If Your House Was On Fire Sponsored by: Caren Krutsinger

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Date: 2/28/2019 12:21:00 AM
A touching poem, Eve. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 2/27/2019 11:46:00 AM
A moving and engaging piece Eve, warm hugs and congratulations. xomo
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Date: 2/27/2019 11:25:00 AM
So well put Eve. The older we get the less important are replaceable items, unlike those held dear to you and your husband. Congratulations on your placement.
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Date: 2/27/2019 12:12:00 AM
I love your poem Eve, congratulations on your win in this contest. Poetry hugs, Jennifer.
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Date: 2/26/2019 11:41:00 PM
A treasure box of memories! Every little thing is so very important. Even straight simple walls would cry. You indeed made absolute logical choice. Beautifully penned. Congratulations!
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Date: 2/6/2019 11:45:00 PM
Hi Eve. love this one, I suppose really we would be lucky to get out with our life, I guess I would be the same as you grab what we can, good luck in the contest and take care.....Vera
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Date: 2/6/2019 9:33:00 PM
Yes, it's hard to know what you would grab in those few minutes; best of luck in the contest.
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Date: 2/6/2019 9:11:00 PM
I was curious about your things which you value most Nice selection. But I recollect twenty years back once a forest fire burst burning long feral grasses just in front of my house. Immediately I called fire brigade n just left the house holding hand of my minor daughter without taking anything. My husband was out and then older daughter was a student studying abroad. Fire brigade took prompt action and fire was under control within twenty minutes. It did not reach my premises.
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Date: 2/6/2019 1:55:00 PM
endearing treasures need to be saved, eve... the pillow and angels are my faves... beautiful.. huggs
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Date: 2/6/2019 9:59:00 AM
You have chosen such precious things to you Eve I had a huge lump in my throat at the pillow stanza. good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 2/6/2019 6:12:00 AM
I pray this will never come to pass you , the reading glasses was to read my poetry yes? LOL I am smiling because I love your paintings and I loved the photo you showed me of all those beautiful angels!!
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Date: 2/6/2019 6:12:00 AM
So funny I had to type "VET" as the captcha
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Date: 2/6/2019 2:12:00 AM
Well written Eve , house fires are devastating, only on the news yesterday four young children lost their lives, the house went up in minutes ,so tragic. Tom.
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