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Seven Hours

Light breeze passing through my hair there is no other moment which has been so fair sitting alone on hilltop there is no way in which my feelings i can stop i am flowing with the wind on the ground i don't want to be pinned was feeling little lonely prayed to god o send someone for my company had parked my bike just on my side coz this is my only friend with whom i can ride then came a sweet dog which gave my thoughts a bog i din realize when he sat next to me he thought he would help my problems flee i had tears in my eyes but it was the breeze because of which my tears dried the clock ticked six there was no way my problem could be fixed i prayed to God who is in heaven because i waited for my love for hours seven he din turn up to come i want my feeling for him to succumb it was time to go i called him once again so that he could know but there was no courtesy he could show one day even he will realize there is no one in this world who can love him so wise!!!!

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Date: 1/11/2012 11:49:00 AM
Thank you forsharing your poetry with us today Freny. Love, Carol
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