Joanna Daniel Poet Verse

Seven For Chaos and Order --- Drama

CLASSROOM DRAMA

                                   Children running about, climbing over all the chairs,
                                       Two boys fighting in a corner, another one stares,
                                           Girls giggling and talking gaily as if who cares,
                Some of them scribbling on the blackboard - the noisy din scares.

I watch the scene silently, standing near the door,
Five full minutes before they notice me, thus ending the uproar,
I walk in. All stand shamefacedly. Peace is restored.


01.28.17



For contest : Seven for chaos and order 
Sponsor : Nette Onclaud

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Winged Warrior February 2, 2017 at 2:21 PM Congrats!!! Jo...'chaos' indeed lol...god bless...^WW^

Sandra Haight February 1, 2017 at 6:57 PM An outstanding presentation of 'chaos' and 'order' in your poem, Jo! Congratulations on your fine placement. Hugs, Sandra

Teddy Kimathi February 1, 2017 at 5:20 PM Hehehe. I feel nostalgic now, remembering my childhood days in school.... Congrats Jo, for your placement in the contest!!! ;-)

Afzal Nusker February 1, 2017 at 11:37 AM You brought back our memories of old school days. Congratulations on your win.

Nette Onclaud February 1, 2017 at 10:21 AM ohh, i can relate to this helter-skelter scene, not to mention my own college students' disruptive gadgets... tough silence works, jo... best congrats on your great win and thanks for supporting this challenge..huggs Joanna Daniel February 2, 2017 at 12:15 AM Thank you, Nette:) never expected this win:) all glory be to God:)

Joseph May February 1, 2017 at 10:06 AM Congrats on a fine win Jo

Kim Rodrigues January 29, 2017 at 7:26 PM Awesome! When the teacher leaves, the children play...lol

John Lawless January 29, 2017 at 10:11 AM JO, we had a teacher in High School who would stand before the class chaos and shout "I DEMAND PANDEMONIUM!".....We would all return to our seats and sit quietly......

Joseph May January 28, 2017 at 1:57 PM Classrooms are often chaotic until the teacher arrives...Great write Jo..

Andrea Dietrich January 28, 2017 at 12:04 PM My ending will be much different!!

Andrea Dietrich January 28, 2017 at 12:03 PM Jo you just gave me a great idea for how to do one of these. RElated to SCHOOL kids. Worst day of my life substitute teaching!! Love your take on this theme!!

Alexis Y. January 28, 2017 at 8:39 AM Hi Jo, This is good. I used to volunteer at my kids school. So I'm familar with this type of chaos. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis

Charlie Smith January 28, 2017 at 8:17 AM Ruler in hand Mother Jo. Well done...

Richard Lamoureux January 28, 2017 at 7:51 AM Ha ha, great story telling. I love it!