Debbie Guzzi Poet Lanterne

Seven Deadly Sins

Lust
Over burns
Lovers in turn
Full of disdain
Wrath
Feeds fire
Gluttony
Death, and despair
Greed
Just breeds
Raw rampant
Inequity
Sloth
Negates
Energies place
Wastefully spaced
Envy
Decries 
Ego’s dark side
Truths, never lies
Pride
Hard hide
Unearned burn
Circle soon turned
Lust

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Jared Pickett July 13, 2009 at 5:41 PM AWESOME!!! Smooth flow, technique on point... good job friend....:JP)

Sara Kendrick July 10, 2009 at 5:01 PM Nice Lanterne. Sara

Michael Jordan July 8, 2009 at 7:43 AM Deborah very ingenious presentation - wonderful message of truth - A pleasure to read, God Bless, MJ

Carol Sunshine Brown July 8, 2009 at 7:08 AM Never seen them presented this way before. Excellent. Love, Carol

Carrie Richards July 8, 2009 at 6:45 AM I think you have covered the Seven sins with your unique style....interesting, and clever choice for the Lanterne! Well done!

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen July 8, 2009 at 3:25 AM Very nice Deborah.