Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty Poet Haiku

Seven Baby Frogs

seven baby frogs
                                  stare at the sky rainful clouds
                                           they go to mother






Traditional haiku - Poetry Contest
Sponsor	Debbie Guzzi
3/10/2015

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Eve Roper March 16, 2015 at 5:02 PM back to congratulate you on your win

Sandra Haight March 13, 2015 at 12:11 PM Congrats on your placement, Rajat! Hugs, Sandra

Andrea Dietrich March 12, 2015 at 9:54 PM I like Deb's advice to you. Congrats on your great win, Rajat.

Debbie Guzzi March 12, 2015 at 7:59 PM always best to write of a single thing rather than a group of things in a haiku BUT [seven baby frogs stare at the sky full of rainclouds: then you need a different line 3? boring to have frogs in both parts hon. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Kim Shaw March 12, 2015 at 2:55 PM Congratulations Rajat! Very cute subject. Nicely done. Hugs, Kimberly

Laura Leiser March 12, 2015 at 1:18 PM Awwww.....I really like this one, so sweet!

Paul Callus March 12, 2015 at 12:51 PM I love your haiku and the baby frogs, Rajat!! Very sweet! Congrats on a fine win. // paul

Kp Nunez March 12, 2015 at 12:32 PM Cute haiku, my friend. Lovely. Congrats. Hugs! :) Kim

Jan Allison March 12, 2015 at 12:20 PM cute image many congrats:-) Hugs Jan xx

Casarah Nance March 12, 2015 at 11:04 AM Cute! Grats on your placement!

Donna Jones March 12, 2015 at 8:12 AM Lovely....always look forward to hearing the frogs again every spring..:-) ..nice smile here..

Eve Roper March 11, 2015 at 11:13 AM Seven baby flogs do need protection from their mother a 7 for this poem

Liam Mcdaid March 11, 2015 at 6:48 AM smiling rajat the mother of all frogs really quite the vision painted

Dorian Petersen Potter March 11, 2015 at 6:02 AM Very nice pen Rajat! A mom to protect them, enjoyed it my dear friend. Wishing you a very lovely day! In His light! God bless you!:) D.

Andrea Dietrich March 10, 2015 at 6:13 PM cute picture!

Tim Smith March 10, 2015 at 2:00 PM Hop along my friends...mother will protect you

Poesy Relish March 10, 2015 at 11:27 AM Aww ... loved it my friend.. sorry that I missed out on your writes...been busy...best wishes, nad

Njeri Hunjeri March 10, 2015 at 12:07 AM Seven baby frogs deserves a seven! All the best in the contest.