Abdul Malik Mandani Poet Rhyme

Set Me Free

With a heavy heart alone
I quest for love unknown,
Wearily I travel the way
My lonesome heart, I pray
Sing to me a song
to last all winter long.

Lest woe fills my mind
O wily wind go find,
      A love of much delight
      ere my soul takes flight,

That I die content bless me
 then set my spirit free.  




~12/26/17
~Rhyme contest by Laura Loo

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Line Gauthier January 3, 2018 at 3:50 PM Congrats on your win, Abdul.

Janice Canerdy December 31, 2017 at 10:00 PM I really like this, Abdul--especially the "Wiley wind" line. Congrats and happy New Year! Janice

Susan Ashley December 31, 2017 at 9:02 PM Your poem is superb Abdul. Lovely rhythm and rhyme captivates to a great conclusion. Congratulations on your wonderful win.. ~Susan

Kim Rodrigues December 31, 2017 at 8:39 PM Lovely flow leading to the final pleasing lines! Congrats, Abdul!

Beautiful Scars December 31, 2017 at 8:28 PM beautiful rhythm and rhyme Abdul, thank you and congrats :)-luloo