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Set Me Free

With a heavy heart alone I quest for love unknown, Wearily I travel the way My lonesome heart, I pray Sing to me a song to last all winter long. Lest woe fills my mind O wily wind go find, A love of much delight ere my soul takes flight, That I die content bless me then set my spirit free. ~12/26/17 ~Rhyme contest by Laura Loo

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Date: 1/3/2018 3:50:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Abdul.
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Date: 12/31/2017 10:00:00 PM
I really like this, Abdul--especially the "Wiley wind" line. Congrats and happy New Year! Janice
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Date: 12/31/2017 9:02:00 PM
Your poem is superb Abdul. Lovely rhythm and rhyme captivates to a great conclusion. Congratulations on your wonderful win.. ~Susan
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Date: 12/31/2017 8:39:00 PM
Lovely flow leading to the final pleasing lines! Congrats, Abdul!
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Date: 12/31/2017 8:28:00 PM
beautiful rhythm and rhyme Abdul, thank you and congrats :)-luloo
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