Dennis Bishop Poet I do not know?

Set Free

When i look into your eyes theirs nothing that i see
nothing but my own mistakes looking back at me

so now we are at the end
time to leave the world of pretend
welcome to reality
where everyone puts doubt in me
for all the failures i made
now all these bad thought make their raid

when i look into your eyes their is nothing i see
nothing but the failure of life being set free

now life has halted
and the story is exalted
of the boy who was treated like nothing more
and was stepped on like he was the floor

now i look into your eyes still theirs nothing i see
nothing but the past coming back to haunt me

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart May 20, 2011 at 9:59 PM Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoyed reading your amazing creative write tonight..hope u have fun on P.S. as u share with luv..

James Foulk May 20, 2011 at 7:41 PM first of all, WELCOME TO POETRY SOUP. this was a very sad and tender write. Coming from your heart.

Dr.Ram Mehta May 20, 2011 at 5:49 PM Very sad, touchy and moving write, dennis