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Sesame Place

Sitting on a shady bench, I watch the people pass - Every shape and color, Strolling sweatily en masse. Shirtless daddies, many fat, With bellies hanging out, Arms and legs and backs tattooed (And other parts, no doubt). Moms deciding where to go, Cajoling tots in line; Babies, toddlers, school-age kids In every stage of whine. Heat pours down and patience frays. Wait! Here's a parade. Cookie Monster, Ernie, Bert And Oscar make the grade. Then it's back to water slides And one more carousel. Squeals and shrieks of joy erupt - It's fun! (or can't you tell?) Hungry! Thirsty! Feed me now! Nacho stand is closed. See the stress within the smiles Of pictures poorly posed. Still, the fam's together And we're mostly having fun. I check my watch - 6 hours left Until this day is done.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 8/26/2018 3:13:00 PM
Just LOVE the ending, ILene. Six more hours of family torture, I mean FUN!! A nice slice of Americana written here! ~ gw
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Date: 8/23/2018 8:15:00 PM
You have included regular every day things, and made them seem much more fun than they are, or maybe they are that much fun! A good eye, and a clever pen, Ilene has created a sweet poem!
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Date: 8/23/2018 2:21:00 PM
What a snapshot in time of a family day out, such vivid imagery! you have painted wonderful picture in my head I feel like I experienced it all with you:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 8/23/2018 2:04:00 PM
Wonderful rhyme. It really captures the moments. Enjoyed immensely.
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