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Serving You

I lift my soul unto you my Father Help me against my enemies, I bow to you Your strength is what I'm searching for,and I seek your honor I will serve you the rest of my days in love with all that I do For Brian Strand ONE SINGLE FOUR LINE END RHYME

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Date: 6/13/2011 3:31:00 PM
Last line tough to live up to consistently. You remind me to plugging on. Thanks for the boost . great sentiment. IF
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Date: 5/22/2011 7:18:00 PM
The power of your faith is inspiring, Matt. Some people pray for material things. I think you pray for guidance as I do. I just want Him to show me the way. This is a fine poem for the contest, Matt. Brian is sure to love the message as much as I do. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/22/2011 5:50:00 PM
Thank you all so much for your kind reviews and comments. They make my day:) Robert Matthew Hunt
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Date: 5/22/2011 5:48:00 PM
Very respectful write to our Heavenly Father, Matt. You honor the Lord every time you write such soulful poetry!! Gwendolen
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Date: 5/22/2011 4:34:00 PM
Reads like a winner..I know Brian will enjoy..Thanks for stopping by and giving me a kind review..Sara
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Date: 5/22/2011 2:58:00 PM
Superb Matt and a super message ..wonderful words to uplift and advise the reader my friend.. we are faithful to HIM and HE never forgets HIS own..luv..good luck in the contest with these awesome lines... thankxx for your nice review of my top ten piece..luv..
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Date: 5/22/2011 1:48:00 PM
great poem to the lord, he will bess you for your sharing of your faithfulness to him, and your praise, thanks for the comments....
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Date: 5/22/2011 9:35:00 AM
a great write, enjoyed this one, good luck in the contest. thank you for commenting on Sweet Child.
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Date: 5/22/2011 12:13:00 AM
Brian ought to really love this one. He too is a spiritual man. Good one for the sabbath!
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