Serving You

I lift my soul unto you my Father
Help me against my enemies, I bow to you
Your strength is what I'm searching for,and I seek your honor
I will serve you the rest of my days in love with all that I do


For Brian Strand
ONE SINGLE FOUR LINE END RHYME
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Foley Avatar
June 13, 2011 at 3:31 PM
Last line tough to live up to consistently. You remind me to plugging on. Thanks for the boost . great sentiment. IF
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May 22, 2011 at 7:18 PM
The power of your faith is inspiring, Matt. Some people pray for material things. I think you pray for guidance as I do. I just want Him to show me the way. This is a fine poem for the contest, Matt. Brian is sure to love the message as much as I do. Love, Carolyn
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May 22, 2011 at 5:50 PM
Thank you all so much for your kind reviews and comments. They make my day:) Robert Matthew Hunt
Song Avatar
May 22, 2011 at 5:48 PM
Very respectful write to our Heavenly Father, Matt. You honor the Lord every time you write such soulful poetry!! Gwendolen
Kendrick Avatar
May 22, 2011 at 4:34 PM
Reads like a winner..I know Brian will enjoy..Thanks for stopping by and giving me a kind review..Sara
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May 22, 2011 at 2:58 PM
Superb Matt and a super message ..wonderful words to uplift and advise the reader my friend.. we are faithful to HIM and HE never forgets HIS own..luv..good luck in the contest with these awesome lines... thankxx for your nice review of my top ten piece..luv..
Green Avatar
May 22, 2011 at 1:48 PM
great poem to the lord, he will bess you for your sharing of your faithfulness to him, and your praise, thanks for the comments....
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May 22, 2011 at 9:35 AM
a great write, enjoyed this one, good luck in the contest. thank you for commenting on Sweet Child.
Dietrich Avatar
May 22, 2011 at 12:13 AM
Brian ought to really love this one. He too is a spiritual man. Good one for the sabbath!
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