Service

When a waiter or a waitress
Seems to go the extra mile,
With a dollop of attention
Or the sprinkle of a smile

Then the meal is so much better
‘Cause the mood is so relaxed;
Conversation keeps on flowing,
No one’s patience getting taxed.

Service such as I’m describing
Sure deserves a big reward,
So when tipping time approaches,
Give the most you can afford.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Marcum Wong Avatar
February 7, 2015 at 11:10 PM
Your poem reminded me of our breakfast yesterday out with our granddaughter. Our waiter was very nice and went the extra mile and my husband rewarded him with a 30% tip of golden dollars. They work very hard! Great tribute to them Ilene!
Dietrich Avatar
February 7, 2015 at 9:50 PM
I used to waitress and it sure is appreciated. They get paid little for doing a lot. Good one.
Guzzi Avatar
February 7, 2015 at 7:54 PM
Waiting on folks is a hard job, you are so right! Light & Love
Allison Avatar
February 7, 2015 at 7:10 PM
I have worked as a waitress Ilene it is incredibly hard work but oh I used to have such fun - one of the customers has become a very dear friend and we meet regularly and the 4 of us go on holiday together:-) Hugs jan xx
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