Rama Balasubramanian Poet Haiku

Serve Egoless Like Nature - El

Our ego soars reaching sky
While earth bound, in earth we die
Nature loves, provides for all
Still has no ego at all
Why not like a river flow?
Serving all while on the go
Our ego soars reaching sky

09.07.2021
	
For Elemental, charles messina

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Bhawana Pant July 31, 2021 at 10:09 AM Congrats!! Serve egoless like nature....very true.

Charles Messina July 31, 2021 at 6:23 AM Very nicely written, Rama. Congratulations on a fine win! Charlie

Christuraj Alex July 31, 2021 at 4:41 AM This is very beautiful writing. Far better than mine. In fact, I made it with your constructive corrections. Thank you for the same. Congratulations on your placement!

Evelyn Judy Buehler July 11, 2021 at 10:12 AM I love the comparisons in this awesome, stirring verse, in which wisdom abounds. Best wishes for the contest. :)

Joanna Daniel July 10, 2021 at 3:51 AM Wise words, Rama:)

Christuraj Alex July 10, 2021 at 3:41 AM Thank you for your information about Elemental. I was careless in reading the rules. I shall rework it. Rama Balasubramanian July 10, 2021 at 4:15 AM You are welcome

Eve Roper July 9, 2021 at 8:10 PM Great write, Rama. Good luck in the contest. Hugs Eve

JC Brul July 9, 2021 at 6:21 PM Very evocative! why not flow like river?—remains connected to the ground while resolutely pushing its way to the sea.. So much wisdom in few words!!! best luck for the sure win!

Andrea Dietrich July 9, 2021 at 2:47 PM I really like how you approached this form and topic WELL done.

Richard Lamoureux July 9, 2021 at 2:35 PM Letting go of ego is a worthy aspiration. Blessing Richard.

Anne-Lise Andresen July 9, 2021 at 12:18 PM - Well done for the contest, Rama ... best wishes :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Alexis Y. July 9, 2021 at 9:50 AM Hi Rama, I like your take on the contest theme. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day and weekend:-) Alexis

Christuraj Alex July 9, 2021 at 7:24 AM It's, indeed, beautiful writing combining the elements.