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---Serpentine River

serpentine river cleave the forest of pine-touch the sunset mount

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Poet Destroyer A

December 7, 2012 at 3:26 PM

good monoku,,,pd

Carol Sunshine Brown

June 9, 2011 at 12:28 PM

Congratulations on a well deserved win in the "Nature Monoku" contest Debbie. Love, Carol

Nick Bagnall

June 8, 2011 at 4:56 AM

Lovely you've managed to capture the entire image, congrats on First Place!

Susan Mills

June 7, 2011 at 1:11 PM

Congratulations on your first place win! Susan

Andrea Dietrich

June 5, 2011 at 8:10 PM

wow, I hadn't seen yours yet. It is splended, Deb, A very well deserved top placement! Congratulations.

Charles Henderson

June 5, 2011 at 4:52 PM

Congratulations on your fine placement with this awsome ku. Chas

Joseph Osita

June 5, 2011 at 12:24 AM

Congrats on your well deserved first place win*huggs*

Sara Kendrick

June 4, 2011 at 5:44 PM

Congratulations..Sara

Caryl Muzzey

June 4, 2011 at 10:20 AM

Congratulations with this beautiful write, I enjoyed the read. Caryl

Carrie Richards

June 4, 2011 at 7:22 AM

Ahh....the word cleave, just captures this whole poem....love it love it! (ps...if it not for your reminder, I would not be in the winner's circle....I had forgotten the monoku/haiku connection........so thank you for the kick in pants!! :) Congratulations on your beauty!

Emma Mantle

June 4, 2011 at 1:30 AM

Great write Debbie, and a great win. Congrats to you. Best wishes Em :)

Jack Horne

June 3, 2011 at 11:36 PM

Awesome. Congratulations on your win, Debbie : )

Sidney Beck

June 3, 2011 at 10:50 PM

beautiful words Deb,..... I tooo wanted to talk about the river and forest....this is one of the earth's most beautiful spots...i used to live nearby years ago....one could write for ever about it...congratulations and my best wishes as always...Syd