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Sermon of the Sun

As golden rays preached,
Startled mist tripped over rocks:
Cedars bowed in praise.

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Debbie Guzzi

April 3, 2010 at 5:40 PM

a fine picture of nature. Light & Love and congrad's

John Freeman

March 30, 2010 at 8:43 AM

Congratulations Raul, an awesome display of your worthy talent. Agape, Moses

Noel Villarosa

March 28, 2010 at 12:31 AM

So much to praise with this lovely haiku, congratulations on your winning this contest, Raul. (^_^) Noel.

Andrea Dietrich

March 26, 2010 at 4:11 PM

Very cleverly done and won, dear Raul! Luv, Andrea

Andrew Crisci

March 26, 2010 at 9:50 AM

Congratulations on your well-deserved win, Raul. This is a very touching and profound Haiku. We see Nature united in prayer and praise. This is a very profound and inspiring Haiku. God bless you. I wish you continued success in your writing endeavors. Peace and love, Andrew.

Iolanda Scripca

March 26, 2010 at 12:10 AM

Congrats, Raul, for this beautiful and original haiku. Thanks for your comment. All the best to you, Iolanda

March 25, 2010 at 1:47 PM

Loved this poem the first time I read it. Congratulations on being one of the winners in Brian's contest. Enjoy this success. Wishing you many more. Karen

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

March 25, 2010 at 9:05 AM

Congrats Raul on your HM in Brian's contest.. such a wonderful descriptive write so vividly portrayed.. enjoy your special moment..luv.. Linda-Marie..

Carrie Richards

March 25, 2010 at 8:53 AM

Each line wonderful! ("Tripped over rocks! love that!! ) Congratulations, Raul, on this winner!! ~

Mitch White

March 25, 2010 at 3:30 AM

Like a motion picture Raul- Congrats

Brian Strand

March 25, 2010 at 1:57 AM

Congrats on your success in my contest Raul.Rgds Brian.My latest contest ANY WHICH WAY is now open.

Gerard Keogh Jr.

March 22, 2010 at 1:21 PM

You are so advanced in this form. I feel foolish even trying to compete with something like this. It has both poise and polish. I concede. Thank you for your comments. I appreciate them. Regards, Gerard.