Hina Nasir Poet Acrostic

Serious Look

S o dispassionate I have BECOME 
E ager voices of people made me NUMB
R ambling tales of them just gave BOREDOM
I  to restore my faith, still silently seek FREEDOM
O ffshore built my own little place to avoid any BOTHERSOME
U nafraid, un-argued, unasked, un-broken, ah my own solemn KINGDOM
S lowly turning in to an old soul though LONESOME

L ooking in the mirror, irking on lost SARCASM
O ver-busied, I made my mind, being DEFEATISM,
O f peace I only yearn and restore gone OPTIMISM
K nowingly of serious look wore, but still don’t know, why feelings are FEARSOME

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Kelly Deschler July 16, 2014 at 9:35 PM Sometimes, when we search so passionately for solitude, we end up finding ourselves alone by abandoning those we loved.... You did an amazing job with this rhyming acrostic poem! You are a very talented writer, Hina! Keep up the great work! Hina Nasir July 17, 2014 at 8:05 AM THANKS A lot ... Kelly .. you are right but being a pessimist ..it seems the only option for me.. this is my first acrostic poem and i was very excited about it ..thanks alot for appreciating ..seriously ! :-)