Tumelo Mogotsi Poet I do not know?

Serinity,Complexitivity

My sactuary is 
my only turf 
my weakness..
is the weakness 
of my own 
personality
serinity and 
calmness flow 
through me
yet you do not 
know what rakes 
within
has life and yet 
takes no form
A dullness not i 
can comprehend
unsettleness of 
the mind and soul
And a churning 
of the brain.

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Charmaine Chircop October 5, 2009 at 8:57 AM excellent,,complex view of your serenity,welcome to poetry soup-Charma

Debbie Guzzi September 14, 2009 at 5:29 AM very rough the place you've decided to dwell, not a place for comapny, decide to dwell elsewhere Light & Love..and it is a very good verse! Perhaps you can try to write me a verse in your own dialect so folks can hear what music the word makes in Botswana!

Nadia Shahwan September 12, 2009 at 8:05 PM Good poem.

Nadia Shahwan September 7, 2009 at 6:47 AM Good poetry.

Sara Kendrick September 6, 2009 at 4:30 PM I think we all here have some churning going on in our brains. Writing helps. Keep writing. Sara

P Sheart September 6, 2009 at 4:11 PM Hi Welcome to PS! We have a few newcomers here today. Come on in and make yourself feel right at home. You'll love it here I'm sure. Good people here. Love your poem. I think we all can relate to your heartfelt sentiments here. Look forward to reading more of your wonderful poetry. Take care Love Light Truth Patricia

Debbie Guzzi September 6, 2009 at 4:06 PM Interesting! Welcome to the soup! Title/ serenity..Light & Love