Serenity

Brotherhood of rocks
beneath slumbering pillars
chirping their mute song
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Brown Avatar
November 11, 2010 at 11:46 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round of the Poetrysoup site contest Oluwaseun. The best to you in the finals. Love, Carol
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October 25, 2010 at 11:57 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poem being picked to be featured this week Oluwaseun. Love, Carol
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September 28, 2009 at 6:21 AM
Pretty good peom. You know? Singing melodious psalms are no longer heard from underneath rocky pillars but are sung courageously in the christian world from the bottom of blissful hearts. Mute song however does not chirp but get choked due to lack of democracy. Pls re-entry as: BROTHERHOOD OF SONGS.. BENEATH ENCHANTING PILLARS.. CHIRP ANGELIC SONGS. Am looking to read more of your poems. All the best.
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September 28, 2009 at 6:03 AM
wow unique idea chirping rocks! when they scrap it does sound like music! Light & Love
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