Notes About The Poem

My friends, the writing of this poem

removed my mind from my woes.

How much more the reality of nature!

Serenity

SERENITY Wash me with glory’s waterfall and evergreen. Jehovah-Rapha recharge the endorphins.* The pine needles tickle my nose with scent. The swoosh of skirted cascade in forest serene. The polished rocks under bare feet, the flow of cool stream that caresses my toes. Defeat cleansed from my soul. I splash salubrious waters into crevices of my woes. Surrounded by the verdant forest of peace - no sticks and stones to break my bones. I am cosseted in this fairytale spell with glorious birdsong and romantic caprice. Symmetry of footfall through winsome waters. Rushing precipice of suds release sore impurities. Stationary giggles, gurgling cheeks piqued. Serenity is servant of the King’s daughter. 9/18/2019 Picturesque Rhyme Poetry Contest Sponsor - Eve Roper *Jehovah-Rapha - The Lord who heals
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Kelii Kekaula Avatar
September 20, 2019 at 8:49 PM
Very soulful comparisons Kim, metaphors, and representations--wonderful rendering ~ Aloha always William
Rodrigues Avatar
September 20, 2019 at 9:53 PM
Thank you, William!
Laurie Avatar
September 18, 2019 at 5:50 PM
Hello Kim … delightful written picture of a piece of serenity indeed. These havens do have an impact on our psych - thanks Kim - Lindsay
Rodrigues Avatar
September 18, 2019 at 9:02 PM
Thank you, Lindsay!
Michael Avatar
September 18, 2019 at 8:51 AM
I like what you did...
Rodrigues Avatar
September 18, 2019 at 11:05 AM
Thank you, Arturo!
Green Avatar
September 18, 2019 at 8:03 AM
Well, there goes my chances of winning but to something as beautiful and enchanting as this, I am not complaining but praising your talent my friend. Wonderfully done.
Rodrigues Avatar
September 18, 2019 at 8:38 AM
Thanks, Chris!
Mcintosh Avatar
September 18, 2019 at 7:51 AM
Beautiful... just beautiful. I believe it will do great in the contest. Blessings to you
Rodrigues Avatar
September 18, 2019 at 7:59 AM
Thank you, Regina!
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