Serenity

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My friends, the writing of this poem

removed my mind from my woes.

How much more the reality of nature!

SERENITY Wash me with glory’s waterfall and evergreen. Jehovah-Rapha recharge the endorphins.* The pine needles tickle my nose with scent. The swoosh of skirted cascade in forest serene. The polished rocks under bare feet, the flow of cool stream that caresses my toes. Defeat cleansed from my soul. I splash salubrious waters into crevices of my woes. Surrounded by the verdant forest of peace - no sticks and stones to break my bones. I am cosseted in this fairytale spell with glorious birdsong and romantic caprice. Symmetry of footfall through winsome waters. Rushing precipice of suds release sore impurities. Stationary giggles, gurgling cheeks piqued. Serenity is servant of the King’s daughter. 9/18/2019 Picturesque Rhyme Poetry Contest Sponsor - Eve Roper *Jehovah-Rapha - The Lord who heals

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Hilo Poet

Date: 9/20/2019 8:49:00 PM

Very soulful comparisons Kim, metaphors, and representations--wonderful rendering ~ Aloha always William

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/20/2019 9:53:00 PM

Thank you, William!

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 9/18/2019 5:50:00 PM

Hello Kim … delightful written picture of a piece of serenity indeed. These havens do have an impact on our psych - thanks Kim - Lindsay

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/18/2019 9:02:00 PM

Thank you, Lindsay!

Arturo Michael

Date: 9/18/2019 8:51:00 AM

I like what you did...

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/18/2019 11:05:00 AM

Thank you, Arturo!

Chris Green

Date: 9/18/2019 8:03:00 AM

Well, there goes my chances of winning but to something as beautiful and enchanting as this, I am not complaining but praising your talent my friend. Wonderfully done.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/18/2019 8:38:00 AM

Thanks, Chris!

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 9/18/2019 7:51:00 AM

Beautiful... just beautiful. I believe it will do great in the contest. Blessings to you

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/18/2019 7:59:00 AM

Thank you, Regina!