Deb Radke Poet Haiku

Serengeti King

stealthily stalking
   grasses of gold disguise him....
      serengeti king

streaks of black and white
   pounding out panic's pursuit....
       dusty clouds of fear

weaklings fall away
   struggle vainly to survive....
      nature roars aloud

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Kash Poet March 1, 2011 at 6:05 AM Congrats deb on your well deserved win with this beautiful Haiku---kashinath

Andrea Dietrich February 28, 2011 at 8:45 PM Congratulations on your win, Deb! An animal I don't know too much about, but you sure give some nice description.

Francine Roberts February 28, 2011 at 8:23 PM love it, powerful haiku, congrats on your win in the contest

Sara Kendrick February 28, 2011 at 5:45 PM Very descriptive work..Congrats..Sara

Dr.Ram Mehta February 28, 2011 at 1:05 PM Congratulations on the second place win in the contest of carol, deb

Sharon Ruebel February 28, 2011 at 10:31 AM Hello Debbie, Congratulations on your well deserved win in the contest with this beautiful entry As Always, Shar

John Freeman February 28, 2011 at 10:15 AM Good to see you poem at the top Deb, beautiful job. Congratulations on your poem's honored second place recognition.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart February 28, 2011 at 7:21 AM Congrats Deb on your second place win in Carol's contest with this elegant entry my friend.. enjoy another grand victory with luv..

Tahera Mannan February 28, 2011 at 7:05 AM nature roars aloud indeed. wow.Many congratulations for this win.

Carol Sunshine Brown February 28, 2011 at 6:13 AM Congratulations on your very deserving win in my contest Deb. This was a hard contest for me to judge. Thank you for supporting my contest another will begin soon. Love, Carol