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Serene Mountain

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                          seeping sustenance
                                     mountain diaphoresis
                                                 herding boulders drink

Copyright © Abe Lopez | Year Posted 2010

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Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 11/11/2010 9:52:00 AM Congratulations on your poetry X3 making it through the first round of the Poetrysoup site contest Abe. The best to you in the finals. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 11/10/2010 5:10:00 AM Congrats Abe on having three poems selected in the first round of competition in the P.S. contest luv.. good luck in the next phase for all three luv.. Login to Reply

Daver Austin Date: 10/26/2010 7:19:00 AM "Diaphoresis?" Wow! Had to look it up. Great Haiku, Abe. Congrats on the selection. Dave Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 10/25/2010 11:58:00 AM Congratulations on your well deserved poem being picked to be featured this week Abe. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Charmaine Chircop Date: 2/17/2010 3:35:00 PM congrat.Well deserved win..Abe..Charma Login to Reply

Audrey Haick Date: 2/15/2010 8:19:00 PM Wow, Abe! Congratulations on your win in the contest! Great work as usual. Peace, Audrey Login to Reply

Brandee Augustus Date: 2/15/2010 12:51:00 PM Very descriptive haiku. I think you gave some life to the picture we were given to describe. I definitely like your last line. Congratulations on your fourth place finish. Login to Reply

Brian Strand Date: 2/15/2010 12:21:00 AM Congrats on your recent contest success Abe.Rgds Brian Login to Reply

Doris Culverhouse Date: 2/14/2010 12:39:00 PM congrats on the win!! love it! Login to Reply

Date: 2/13/2010 8:09:00 AM Like the alliteration in the opening line. Interesting poem to reflect on. Congratulations on placing fourth in Raul's contest. Enjoy your success. Keep on writing!!!! Karen Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 2/13/2010 6:53:00 AM Congratulations on your win in Raul's Sunrise contest Abe. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 2/13/2010 5:47:00 AM Congrats Abe on your winning poem in the Sunrise contest.. a wonderful Haiku to express the photo.. enjoyed ..luv.. Linda-Marie Login to Reply

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 2/13/2010 4:53:00 AM Congratulations Abe on a wonderful write and win. Blessings, Connie Login to Reply

Charmaine Chircop Date: 2/12/2010 11:08:00 PM Original..and Serene are these words indeed..Charma Login to Reply

Raul Moreno Date: 2/12/2010 10:25:00 PM Abe, congrats on your placement in my contest...Raul Login to Reply

Kim Hilliker Date: 2/12/2010 10:13:00 PM Nice Haiku - it would be good for the Sunrise contest. Login to Reply

Jessica Arteaga Date: 2/12/2010 8:19:00 PM my guess for the contest obvious winner this great haiku Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 2/12/2010 8:15:00 PM A wonderful Haiku and good luck if for Raul's new Sunrise contest.. very visual and magnificent words Abe.. my entry is Panorama.. luv.. Linda-Marie.. Login to Reply