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Serene Mountain

. seeping sustenance mountain diaphoresis herding boulders drink

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/11/2010 9:52:00 AM

Congratulations on your poetry X3 making it through the first round of the Poetrysoup site contest Abe. The best to you in the finals. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/10/2010 5:10:00 AM

Congrats Abe on having three poems selected in the first round of competition in the P.S. contest luv.. good luck in the next phase for all three luv..

Daver Austin

Date: 10/26/2010 7:19:00 AM

"Diaphoresis?" Wow! Had to look it up. Great Haiku, Abe. Congrats on the selection. Dave

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/25/2010 11:58:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved poem being picked to be featured this week Abe. Love, Carol

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 2/17/2010 3:35:00 PM

congrat.Well deserved win..Abe..Charma

Audrey Haick

Date: 2/15/2010 8:19:00 PM

Wow, Abe! Congratulations on your win in the contest! Great work as usual. Peace, Audrey

Brandee Augustus

Date: 2/15/2010 12:51:00 PM

Very descriptive haiku. I think you gave some life to the picture we were given to describe. I definitely like your last line. Congratulations on your fourth place finish.

Brian Strand

Date: 2/15/2010 12:21:00 AM

Congrats on your recent contest success Abe.Rgds Brian

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 2/14/2010 12:39:00 PM

congrats on the win!! love it!

Date: 2/13/2010 8:09:00 AM

Like the alliteration in the opening line. Interesting poem to reflect on. Congratulations on placing fourth in Raul's contest. Enjoy your success. Keep on writing!!!! Karen

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/13/2010 6:53:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Raul's Sunrise contest Abe. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/13/2010 5:47:00 AM

Congrats Abe on your winning poem in the Sunrise contest.. a wonderful Haiku to express the photo.. enjoyed ..luv.. Linda-Marie

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 2/13/2010 4:53:00 AM

Congratulations Abe on a wonderful write and win. Blessings, Connie

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 2/12/2010 11:08:00 PM

Original..and Serene are these words indeed..Charma

Raul Moreno

Date: 2/12/2010 10:25:00 PM

Abe, congrats on your placement in my contest...Raul

Kim Hilliker

Date: 2/12/2010 10:13:00 PM

Nice Haiku - it would be good for the Sunrise contest.

Jessica Arteaga

Date: 2/12/2010 8:19:00 PM

my guess for the contest obvious winner this great haiku

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/12/2010 8:15:00 PM

A wonderful Haiku and good luck if for Raul's new Sunrise contest.. very visual and magnificent words Abe.. my entry is Panorama.. luv.. Linda-Marie..