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Serene Mountain

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                          seeping sustenance
                                     mountain diaphoresis
                                                 herding boulders drink

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Carol Sunshine Brown

November 11, 2010 at 9:52 AM

Congratulations on your poetry X3 making it through the first round of the Poetrysoup site contest Abe. The best to you in the finals. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

November 10, 2010 at 5:10 AM

Congrats Abe on having three poems selected in the first round of competition in the P.S. contest luv.. good luck in the next phase for all three luv..

Daver Austin

October 26, 2010 at 7:19 AM

"Diaphoresis?" Wow! Had to look it up. Great Haiku, Abe. Congrats on the selection. Dave

Carol Sunshine Brown

October 25, 2010 at 11:58 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved poem being picked to be featured this week Abe. Love, Carol

Charmaine Chircop

February 17, 2010 at 3:35 PM

congrat.Well deserved win..Abe..Charma

Audrey Haick

February 15, 2010 at 8:19 PM

Wow, Abe! Congratulations on your win in the contest! Great work as usual. Peace, Audrey

Brandee Augustus

February 15, 2010 at 12:51 PM

Very descriptive haiku. I think you gave some life to the picture we were given to describe. I definitely like your last line. Congratulations on your fourth place finish.

Brian Strand

February 15, 2010 at 12:21 AM

Congrats on your recent contest success Abe.Rgds Brian

Doris Culverhouse

February 14, 2010 at 12:39 PM

congrats on the win!! love it!

February 13, 2010 at 8:09 AM

Like the alliteration in the opening line. Interesting poem to reflect on. Congratulations on placing fourth in Raul's contest. Enjoy your success. Keep on writing!!!! Karen

Carol Sunshine Brown

February 13, 2010 at 6:53 AM

Congratulations on your win in Raul's Sunrise contest Abe. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

February 13, 2010 at 5:47 AM

Congrats Abe on your winning poem in the Sunrise contest.. a wonderful Haiku to express the photo.. enjoyed ..luv.. Linda-Marie

Connie Marcum Wong

February 13, 2010 at 4:53 AM

Congratulations Abe on a wonderful write and win. Blessings, Connie

Charmaine Chircop

February 12, 2010 at 11:08 PM

Original..and Serene are these words indeed..Charma

Raul Moreno

February 12, 2010 at 10:25 PM

Abe, congrats on your placement in my contest...Raul

Kim Hilliker

February 12, 2010 at 10:13 PM

Nice Haiku - it would be good for the Sunrise contest.

Jessica Arteaga

February 12, 2010 at 8:19 PM

my guess for the contest obvious winner this great haiku

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

February 12, 2010 at 8:15 PM

A wonderful Haiku and good luck if for Raul's new Sunrise contest.. very visual and magnificent words Abe.. my entry is Panorama.. luv.. Linda-Marie..

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