Serene Evening

Stillness my vacant eyes dart around to feel, Evening’s redness is sliding into night’s lap, a glow alights its appeal. Road that converges into my apartment building seems lonely, Each window awaits the arrival of beings who are homely. Now I sit on the swing perched on my terrace garden, Every time I look at the green mountains, my stare it hardens…. Every bird I can see flying homeward in flocks, Valiant squirrel it runs around from coconut trees to garden rocks, Every leaf from the tree is closing itself to the world, Night slowly creeps upon me its shadow unfurled. Insects crowd around the light on the terrace wall, Now it’s time for me to listen to the wind’s whistling call. Grand wind chimes on the roof make sweet melodies as night befalls.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 3/16/2012 8:40:00 AM
So many sweet scenes i see with mind's eye......Congratulations on your win,Sasi!
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Sashi Prabhu
Date: 3/16/2012 10:16:00 AM
thank you for the wishes
Date: 3/16/2012 4:50:00 AM
Beautiful poem by you Sashi.Congrats on your win.
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Sashi Prabhu
Date: 3/16/2012 7:38:00 AM
thanks Kash for the wishes.......~sashi
Date: 3/15/2012 9:04:00 PM
Sashi, this is wonderful and I really enjoyed the read. Congrats in the contest.
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Date: 3/16/2012 7:39:00 AM
Andrea, thank you very much for the wishes........~sashi
Date: 3/15/2012 4:12:00 PM
So many lonely people all over the world and yet too far apart to do each other much good [sigh] sounds beautiful and is and would be more so with someone to share it with. Congrad's Light & Love
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Sashi Prabhu
Date: 3/16/2012 7:40:00 AM
thank you Debbie for the warm wishes and words........~sashi
Date: 3/15/2012 2:02:00 PM
congrats sashi on winning an HM for contest luv..
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Sashi Prabhu
Date: 3/16/2012 7:40:00 AM
thank you Linda.....~sashi
Date: 3/15/2012 1:10:00 PM
Congratulations on your super win in Brian's "Bakers Dozen" contest Sashi. Love, Carol
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Sashi Prabhu
Date: 3/16/2012 7:41:00 AM
thank you Carol .........~sashi
Date: 12/26/2011 12:11:00 PM
An excellent poem by you Sashi.It is an Acrostic with rhyming.Well done.
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