Serene Evening

Stillness my vacant eyes dart around to feel, Evening’s redness is sliding into night’s lap, a glow alights its appeal. Road that converges into my apartment building seems lonely, Each window awaits the arrival of beings who are homely. Now I sit on the swing perched on my terrace garden, Every time I look at the green mountains, my stare it hardens…. Every bird I can see flying homeward in flocks, Valiant squirrel it runs around from coconut trees to garden rocks, Every leaf from the tree is closing itself to the world, Night slowly creeps upon me its shadow unfurled. Insects crowd around the light on the terrace wall, Now it’s time for me to listen to the wind’s whistling call. Grand wind chimes on the roof make sweet melodies as night befalls.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

M V Avatar
March 16, 2012 at 8:40 AM
So many sweet scenes i see with mind's eye......Congratulations on your win,Sasi!
Prabhu Avatar
March 16, 2012 at 10:16 AM
thank you for the wishes
Poet Avatar
March 16, 2012 at 4:50 AM
Beautiful poem by you Sashi.Congrats on your win.
Prabhu Avatar
March 16, 2012 at 7:38 AM
thanks Kash for the wishes.......~sashi
Dietrich Avatar
March 15, 2012 at 9:04 PM
Sashi, this is wonderful and I really enjoyed the read. Congrats in the contest.
Prabhu Avatar
March 16, 2012 at 7:39 AM
Andrea, thank you very much for the wishes........~sashi
Guzzi Avatar
March 15, 2012 at 4:12 PM
So many lonely people all over the world and yet too far apart to do each other much good [sigh] sounds beautiful and is and would be more so with someone to share it with. Congrad's Light & Love
Prabhu Avatar
March 16, 2012 at 7:40 AM
thank you Debbie for the warm wishes and words........~sashi
Sweetheart Avatar
March 15, 2012 at 2:02 PM
congrats sashi on winning an HM for contest luv..
Prabhu Avatar
March 16, 2012 at 7:40 AM
thank you Linda.....~sashi
Brown Avatar
March 15, 2012 at 1:10 PM
Congratulations on your super win in Brian's "Bakers Dozen" contest Sashi. Love, Carol
Prabhu Avatar
March 16, 2012 at 7:41 AM
thank you Carol .........~sashi
Poet Avatar
December 26, 2011 at 12:11 PM
An excellent poem by you Sashi.It is an Acrostic with rhyming.Well done.
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace