Serene

buffalo serene gliding over the ravine…. bloody gruesome scene

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/10/2010 10:58:00 AM

Thank you for sharing your wonderful poetry here at PoetrySoup this year Robb. May you and yours have a wonderful Holiday Season and may the New Year bring you and yours good health, and may your hearts be overflowing with love and happiness. Love and blessings always, Carol

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/29/2010 9:50:00 AM

Your haiku makes me think of the way buffalos were massacred for their hides in "Dances with Wolves," Robb. A gruesome scene indeed. The Native Americans ate the buffalo meat and felt it was unconscionable to take only their hides and leave them to die. Excellent haiku! Best wishes, Carolyn