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Serene

captivated and held
hostage by the
setting of the sun

Copyright © Deneen White | Year Posted 2008

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December 28, 2008 at 1:13 PM

Very nice unique imagery! Thanks for your comments and reading my work. Light & Love Debbie Guzzi

Vince Suzadail Jr.

November 1, 2008 at 7:01 PM

Pretty scene. My daughter and I would sit on the boardwalk in Virginia Beach and watch that sun set over the horizon. I miss those days. Vince

October 31, 2008 at 3:13 PM

Beautiful Haiku Deneen. There are wonderful sunsets here in Tuscany, but not this week, unfortunately. Your write has enabled me to watch the sun set despite the incessant wind and rain! Happy Halloween. Love, Nigel

October 29, 2008 at 3:57 PM

ohhh, ive been in that setting and its breathtaking. Very nicely put.

Christopher Higgins

October 29, 2008 at 7:40 AM

I love the sun and the warmth of it all and your poem placed my mind in a summer state. Wish the sun and its warmth was still with us.

October 29, 2008 at 5:50 AM

Oh brilliant! Has happened to me many times. So well written. Love, Shar

October 29, 2008 at 4:49 AM

A perfect haiku, one of the best I've read. Love, daver

October 28, 2008 at 7:59 PM

Wonderful feeling you put me in with this excellent write. Blessings Michael

Carrie Richards

October 28, 2008 at 6:30 PM

Yes...I have been captivated many, many times! ~ Carrie

October 28, 2008 at 6:08 PM

Deneen your smoking ~what an excellent Haiku you created!!!! I love it! Laura :)

October 28, 2008 at 5:58 PM

Sunsets mesmerize me also....you have described the feeling quite expressively. Love, Sara

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