Serena

Her opponents on the court
Must battle inner quaking
In anticipation of the shots
That she will soon be making.

Watching her attack the ball
Is so intimidating,
I would hate to be the one
Across the net, just waiting.

As a fan, I watch in awe – 
Her power, strength and muscle,
Plus the fleetness of her feet
Add up to quite a hustle.

Toss determination in – 
She’ll go that extra mile –
And you’ve got Serena:
She’s a powerhouse with style.

I’m watching her compete right now,
In neon pink and yellow,
And every aspect of her game
Is anything but mellow.

The match is done – Serena’s won,
An outcome not surprising;
As for her future challengers,
I’ll soon be sympathizing.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Ramage Avatar
September 9, 2012 at 10:35 AM
I'm assuming this is Serena Williams, so well describes her tennis play. She is amazing, I agree. well done. Lee
Horne Avatar
September 9, 2012 at 9:01 AM
lovely tribute to Serena, Ilene - I'm not into sport, but after reading this I'll look out for her
Sweetheart Avatar
September 5, 2012 at 5:25 AM
true essence of a great tennis icon .. and clothing designer too .. she makes women proud everywhere .. nice tribute to a gifted athlete luv ..
Dietrich Avatar
September 4, 2012 at 5:39 AM
So who is this awesomely athletic Serena? This one makes me interested in knowing if it's maybe a daughter or friend of yours? Or if it's someone famous or popular in the sport. Nicely done, Ilene.
Wright Avatar
September 3, 2012 at 6:36 PM
Well done.
Cavanaugh Avatar
September 3, 2012 at 1:22 PM
lovely poem. usually long poems don't hold my attention but yours captivated me
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