Seren and Deep

Simhaladvipa 
Lamka Sri island so deep 
the Seren and dip

the green mountain and,
deep-rooted, Adam and Eve
bright red ruby sparks
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Dietrich Avatar
October 25, 2016 at 3:52 PM
Love the imagery in it. The dip and the bright red ruby sparks!
Alhemaidy Avatar
October 25, 2016 at 4:48 PM
Thank you lovely Andrea. Have a nice time.
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