Sequence-The Counsellor

He
opens
hearts and minds
in sickness and
health-
He
draws us 
to himself
a quiet voice
we
hear
prompts
and reminds-
until peace we
find-
Then
fills us
with His word,
so we may be
heard

Inspired by Agnes McDonald's-Find me a hard place'
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Keogh Jr. Avatar
March 21, 2010 at 3:39 PM
Youir contests are unique and so is your writing. That's why I enter them and that's why I admire your individual style and panache. Regards, Gerard.
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March 18, 2010 at 4:34 AM
Brian- Listening...these days we have to pay someone to listen. Has that always been? Was it back when Jesus walked and talked? I wonder. Very enjoyable reading this morning. Thanks for your thoughts. Smiles, Dane Ann
Sweetheart Avatar
March 17, 2010 at 12:11 PM
Yes He fills us with His Word so we may be heard.. what an emphatic and elegant thought .. full of truth and luv. Brian... thankxxx for I have received my prize today from u for my first place win in the Easter Celebration contest.. cannot wait to read..luv.. Linda-Marie..
Culverhouse Avatar
March 17, 2010 at 11:06 AM
enjoyed reading today, it is raining here and cold.
Kendrick Avatar
March 17, 2010 at 4:00 AM
Great faith write...Brian..Keep up the good work. Sara
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