Sequence-Sixth Sense

The
portents 
of danger,
seen in our mind's
eye-
an
x-ray
picture that
whispers to the
heart
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Bird Avatar
June 9, 2009 at 9:46 PM
Great message Brian, listen to the voices before you get in too deep. Love this!
Winter Avatar
June 9, 2009 at 9:42 AM
I get those 'whispers' often. Excellent write. Love, Shar
Devonshire Avatar
June 9, 2009 at 9:31 AM
We are wise to heed those pictures "that whisper to the heart," Brian. Excellent write! Love, carolyn
Adeite Avatar
June 9, 2009 at 9:15 AM
Interesting the way you paint the truth.. great you! Keep the flag flying dear friend… hmm
Higgins Avatar
June 9, 2009 at 5:48 AM
Yep, that sixth sense that has freed me from many pending catastrophes.
Goff Avatar
June 9, 2009 at 4:26 AM
whisper-thin perfection, Brian! you nailed "6th-sense!" Jim
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