Sequence-Ripples of Life

A
pebble
in the pond
transparency
hides
in
abstract
reflections-
of vertigos
sight
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Winter Avatar
October 30, 2008 at 11:17 AM
Crystal clear imagery. Visual words of insight and beauty. Love, Shar
Jordan Avatar
October 30, 2008 at 6:45 AM
Brian this is excellent - One of your best - Loved it - God Bless
Kelly Avatar
October 30, 2008 at 4:39 AM
Dead-right , Brian .... See what happened with the sub-prime pebble in the US pond .... My poor bank manager now has vertigo ....
Higgins Avatar
October 30, 2008 at 4:38 AM
Such a peaceful picture Brian. Your poem always place me at scene. Another wonderful write.
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