Brian Strand Poet Crystalline

Sequence-Ridings Ramble

sea buckthorn in a dense hedge screen
between ceanothus shade green

by a trickling stream so shallow
willows shadow flowering mallow

stone-bridged hamlets nestle in the dales
ancient walled fields along their vales

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John Freeman September 3, 2009 at 6:24 PM Your wording arrangment in this is extraordinary, witty. Sincerely Moses

Carrie Richards September 3, 2009 at 8:35 AM So lovely and peaceful....I would love to be walking through those dales and vales....Beautiful images! ~ Love, Carrie

Sara Kendrick September 3, 2009 at 1:48 AM Interesting. I notice you use flowering mallow. I read in a book about herbs that there is a mallow plant that was originally used to make marshmallows. Is this the plant?Sara