Sequence-Passing Seasons

Spring
watches
a flower-
August a moon-
as
Fall
dresses
scarlet red-
winter silent
calls

Note seen with Japanese haiku eyes
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Torres Avatar
January 5, 2009 at 5:15 PM
Brian this one is really exceptional. Very nice very clever. Liked it alot. GBU Michael
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January 4, 2009 at 7:18 AM
Amazing. Going through the seasons with such poetic talent. Truly brilliant. Love, Shar
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January 4, 2009 at 4:09 AM
Amazing! Wow, this is so gentle and birlliant, and is going into my favorites. what a beauty here, Brian! Love, Kristin
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January 4, 2009 at 1:42 AM
Grat work Brian, the seasons are beautifully felt...Raul
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