Sequence-Moody Blues

Change
the clock,
au revoir-
Summer waves bye
bye-
Fall
falters,
daylight fades,
yellowing the
glade-
dark 
and damp-
November
closes in on
me
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Kelly Avatar
October 25, 2009 at 10:31 AM
Got in spot-on , Sir Brian in this perfect Lanterne sequence and cleverly named ... Now who could ever forget " Nights In White Satin " ????? ...
Richards Avatar
October 25, 2009 at 8:26 AM
Another beauty from your pen this morning....a rather sad farewell....as we enter a new, darker and colder season. Well done! ~ Carrie
Kendrick Avatar
October 25, 2009 at 4:38 AM
It is here and soon the cold short days. More warm drinks, books to read, and chili to eat. Keep writing. Sara
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