Brian Strand Poet Fibonacci

Sequence-Mood Change

Grey
clouds
above-
the sunshine
hides 'neath the duvet..
so,
so
tired
ebbs the tide..
of enertia:
a
call,
a word
in season-
flowers deep within
and
hope
alights
again on
optimism's tree.

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Sharon Winter May 25, 2009 at 6:34 AM Warmest congrats Brian on your most excellent and well deserved win in Michael's contest! Love, Shar

Raul Moreno May 24, 2009 at 1:25 PM Congrats Brian in you big win in the contest...Raul

Carrie Richards May 24, 2009 at 12:28 PM A delightful winning poem, Brian !!!Congratulations on your win in Michael's Contest !!! Love, Carrie

Emily Kroeger April 24, 2009 at 8:40 AM aww pretty

Charlene Bird April 23, 2009 at 12:05 PM A very lovely piece of artistery here Brian. Thank you for commenting on my work Always appreciated

Carrie Richards April 23, 2009 at 8:12 AM I love the hope that peeks out of the cloudy first words of this poem. Inspiring! ~ Best wishes, Carrie

Lena Townsend April 23, 2009 at 6:54 AM Such a powerful write. This one is a reminder that life has endless possibilities because in faith there is always the opportunity for change. Great writing and for introducing me to yet another beautiful form. Smiles from Lolita

Sharon Winter April 23, 2009 at 6:10 AM Well, I can relate to this beautifully expressed poem. Love this form, you do wonders with. (Enjoying the book Brian, it is awesome.) Love, Shar

Christopher Higgins April 23, 2009 at 4:42 AM wonderfully stated...message conveyed. Thanks for your comments Brian.

James Marshall Goff April 23, 2009 at 4:10 AM Brian, your creative ability to express intense emotions with 1 or 2 word lines is amazing! Jim