Brian Strand Poet Quintain (English)

Sequence-Mathetes

He 
who would
a disciple be-
first,hears a call by
me
He 
who would
my disciple be-
sits close,near to
me
He 
who would
a disciple be-
learns so much from
me
He 
who would
my disciple be-
first,shall witness to
me
He 
who would
a disciple see-
first notes,a likeness to
me

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Inkstain Thepoet November 11, 2009 at 9:24 AM This poem touches me in so many ways spiritually, and though it may be brief, it sums up the actual meaning of being God's true followers. Excellent write Brian and continue to compose meaningful and beautiful pooetry.

Marty Owens November 8, 2009 at 8:08 PM Very Nice...Enjoyed...Marty

Sara Kendrick November 7, 2009 at 1:46 PM You've got that one right on. Nicely done work. Keep writing. Sara

Charmaine Chircop November 7, 2009 at 12:02 PM Just loved it.. excellent..Charma

Jared Pickett November 7, 2009 at 9:18 AM I like this sequence Brian... Nice rhyme, and creativity.......:JP]