Sequence-Light My Fire

When
sun sets,
night descends,
who,can our life
mend
From
on high,
in the sky,
Morning Star we
spy-
As
day breaks
shadows flee,
in His light,we
see,
The 
Dayspring,
eternal
life,with trust,can
bring
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Shango Avatar
December 11, 2009 at 7:35 AM
I feel a deep spirituality here, a profound social commentary, and human sense of contentment. Bravo
Richards Avatar
December 10, 2009 at 2:58 PM
Breathtaking poem here, Brian. Wow...this is a keeper! I need to print this out! Thank you for sharing such lovely words. ~ Love, Carrie
Sweetheart Avatar
December 10, 2009 at 2:05 PM
Such beautiful ... most lovely .. words I ever read.. I appreciate and thankxxx so much for choosing my poem as an Honorable Mention... enjoy the challenge u put forth for us here on the Soup.. always enjoy the blogs too... again, thankxxx .. am feverishly working on your new contest... hope to have an entry soon... luv.. blessings... Linda-Marie...
Kendrick Avatar
December 10, 2009 at 9:44 AM
Love this one for subtility of faith that I see. Keep the magical pen flowing. Sara
Kapoor Avatar
December 10, 2009 at 9:00 AM
Excellent and very Beautiful. Very bright and lovely hopes for His light which comes after every dark night and that too in few words only. Great. Thanks for a lovely poem. I have also placed few Natures, Love and other poems. Hope you would like to go through them. I shall be waiting for your comments. Best wishes and love Ravindra
Jordan Avatar
December 10, 2009 at 6:37 AM
Brian you will forever be the master of these short poems - I just don't know how you do it - Simply amazing - Merry Christmas and God Bless, mj
Meade Stephenson Avatar
December 10, 2009 at 5:22 AM
Beautiful in its simplicity yet powerful and filled with faith! Thanks so much for sharing and for your kind comments on my works~Mary
Nutter Avatar
December 10, 2009 at 3:15 AM
Your creativity is really being demonstrated in this piece. Excellent write.
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