Sequence-In England Seen Today

The pussy-willow,golden yellow
bathed in sunlight,oh so mellow

Daffodils nodding in the breeze,
as early birds canoodle in trees

below zero nights of snow flakes
become icicle delights in daylight
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Sweetheart Avatar
March 11, 2010 at 6:18 PM
Great write Brian..was checking out the Crystalline form of poetry and went right to the Master Poet here.. enjoyed and thankxxx ..luv.. "Sweetheart"
Culverhouse Avatar
February 26, 2010 at 7:10 PM
sounds beautiful and like spring!!
Dietrich Avatar
February 22, 2010 at 1:39 PM
cute line, canoodle in trees!! thanks for your comment today. LUv, andrea
Richards Avatar
February 22, 2010 at 10:11 AM
This is picture perfect! Sounds like wonderful inspiration for your artistic talents...it is no wonder you are a painter! Lovely poem, Brian!
Kendrick Avatar
February 22, 2010 at 8:57 AM
It is amazing how the early flowers and buds can withstand what seems too cold weather for them to survive. The end rhyme are very good. Keep the creative pen flowing. My poem about the bowling was metaphoric language for a thunder and lighting storm. The dog was real. Thanks for stopping by and commenting. It made my day. Sara
Sweetheart Avatar
February 22, 2010 at 8:50 AM
Descriptive scene in your lines Brian.. felt as if I looked out my window I might see across the many miles between us.. luv.. Linda-Marie..
Palli Avatar
February 22, 2010 at 8:34 AM
Can picture it!
Pickett Avatar
February 22, 2010 at 8:32 AM
Awesome flow.. Good form my friend... :JP]
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