Sequence-Full Circle

Blue
mist
upon
a blue day-
will the sun break through
the sadness I feel
within me,
and lift 
this
gloom ?
wait..
work,
subsume
my being
in activity-
a light awakens
positive
outlooks
in 
me

Inspired by John 8:12
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Winter Avatar
November 6, 2008 at 6:05 AM
Brilliant and beautiful! I love the word subsume. This is an incredible write. Love, Shar
Torres Avatar
November 6, 2008 at 5:24 AM
Brian this is wonderful. I love this style and openness, directness, Love this one. Michael Torres
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November 6, 2008 at 3:43 AM
Beautiful, beautiful, beautiful! Wow, Brian, this is so inspiring and visual, i love it. Excellent! love Kristin
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