Sequence-Fallen

If
we would
but know it,
and turn around 
we
find,
there is
new life, now
and eternal 
then


Inspired upon reading Chris Flathery's poem today.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Haick Avatar
March 5, 2010 at 7:11 AM
Wisdom and truth in this poem, Brian! Thank you for reading and leaving your comments on mine. Peace, Audrey
Kendrick Avatar
March 5, 2010 at 5:03 AM
The turning sometimes is the hardest part....Keep the creative pen flowing. Have you read my recent write "The Angel" ...I would appreciate your opinion....Sara
Sweetheart Avatar
March 4, 2010 at 8:55 AM
As the season for reflection is surrounding us .. great words to ponder Brian... thankxxx for this reminder.. luv.. "Sweetheart"
Richards Avatar
March 4, 2010 at 7:42 AM
A beautiful Lanterne filled with hope, faith, and the peace of knowing. ~ Carrie
Dietrich Avatar
March 4, 2010 at 6:56 AM
You stated it RIGHT, Brian! LUv, Andrea
Brown Avatar
March 4, 2010 at 5:25 AM
So true Brian. Thank you for sharing with us today. I am so happy your poetry was among the poetry I have read this morning. May your day be filled with love and inspiration. Love, Carol
Smith Avatar
March 4, 2010 at 1:26 AM
oh yes, I truly believe it is so, good write. Ellen
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