Sequence-Confluence

It
is there,
yet it is not,
flowing,never
still-
to and fro
to the sea,
wanders where it
will.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Culverhouse Avatar
January 17, 2010 at 2:12 PM
good work, ennoyed today.
Sweetheart Avatar
January 17, 2010 at 11:13 AM
SOUP MAIL Brian.. wonderful Lanterne... very nice flow to it... LMB....
Dietrich Avatar
January 17, 2010 at 7:45 AM
I'll have to check out this form sometime. You do it quite nicely, Brian! Luv, andrea
Nutter Avatar
January 17, 2010 at 4:36 AM
I liked this piece, it does leave a lot to the imagination.
Kendrick Avatar
January 17, 2010 at 3:59 AM
Interesting write. This one is open-ended because it could be anything or people or animals or organization. Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work "Ownership". Not a happy write but a necessity of life. Sara
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