Brian Strand Poet Lanterne

Sequence-Brief Beauties

Like
rockets
in the sky-
delphiniums
blaze
their
upward
revelry-
spires of colour,
sleek

My latest contest LIGHT MY FIRE is for this lanterne form either in original 5 lines or exteded 
sequence thereof as above

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Carol Sunshine Brown June 30, 2009 at 5:06 AM So, this is what a Lanterne is all about Brian. Thank you for writing and sharing it with us. I must say this one is beautiful. Love, Carol

Charlene Bird June 29, 2009 at 10:45 AM This poem is a beauty Brian, lovely imager, that you always show with your chosen words. Good luck in the contest!

Carolyn Devonshire June 29, 2009 at 8:56 AM Style and grace are your trademarks, Brian. Thank you for always introducing me to new verse forms. This one contains a uniquely colorful image! Love, Carolyn

Carrie Richards June 29, 2009 at 6:47 AM This sounds fun and a great new challenging contest Brian. (I think you would win your own contest with this great Lanterne!)

James Marshall Goff June 29, 2009 at 4:27 AM sounds good, Brian! I 'll sharpen my pencil!!! beautiful write... jim