Sequence-Blank Verse

The
tinsel
trappings
of poetic
pride
too often
inhabit
forms tested and
tried
and
leave truth
abandoned -
with nowhere to
hide
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Richards Avatar
February 4, 2010 at 9:35 AM
Very profound.....Oh my...I really like this, so much honesty in this lanterne! Many thanks Brian, for placing my "tree" poem in your contest. And I thank you once again, for sponsoring such interesting and varied contests...such a great learning tool for our poetry! Thank you! ~ Carrie
Zoller Avatar
February 3, 2010 at 5:43 PM
But it hides, much too successfully. Nice poem. Thank you.
Culverhouse Avatar
February 3, 2010 at 5:41 PM
enjoyed reading today,
Dietrich Avatar
February 3, 2010 at 6:59 AM
Yes, sometimes words can seem just like tinsel! Good way to express it! andrea
Sweetheart Avatar
February 3, 2010 at 6:09 AM
Ultimate words to reflect upon.. and a brand new fav of mine today... apropos for current situations flowing on site... thankxxx luv.. Linda-Marie..
Kendrick Avatar
February 3, 2010 at 3:29 AM
Question: Does the poet use form perfectly and leave off the truth? Not sure if that is what you mean. Keep the perceptive pen flowing. Sara
Palli Avatar
February 3, 2010 at 2:38 AM
I enjoyed that
Kelly Avatar
February 3, 2010 at 2:22 AM
Much said in a " blank verse " !! , as ever , Sir Brian ...
Harman Avatar
February 3, 2010 at 1:55 AM
it seems like it says truth is exposed by following the rules...
Moreno Avatar
February 3, 2010 at 12:27 AM
Love the rhyme scheme used, nice work...Raul
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