Brian Strand Poet Crystalline

Sequence-A Love Affair

Sensations tingling up the spine
as heaving emotions re-align

Flowers of beauty within the heart
festoon the gestures they impart

On the trail of nows-broken vows
echo to a distant horizon

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Deneen White November 8, 2008 at 5:31 PM this is a beautiful write Michael, so elegant and right, take care D-ncye

Michael Jordan November 8, 2008 at 10:02 AM Brian this poem is beautiful - Always love your writing - God Bless, Michael

Kristin Reynolds November 8, 2008 at 6:21 AM so very very sad. Vows seem to mean nothing to some anymore - very sad, but beautifully written, love Kristin

Sharon Winter November 8, 2008 at 6:17 AM Hope I am getting this right. Some never forgive broken vows, so this beautiful write expresses a happy ending (or new beginning). Love, Shar

Michael Torres November 8, 2008 at 4:13 AM provocoive I can spell, sometimes...

Michael Torres November 8, 2008 at 4:12 AM Sinful nature. Provacative write Brian. Blessings Michael Torres

Chitra Lakhera November 8, 2008 at 3:05 AM Hehe Brian, thats just what happens:) Greatly penned! So much in every line. Take care, Chitra