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Sequence Dawn

Sunrise ripples across the lake confusions surface as I awake Amid the eerie dayspring light yesterday's memories glow so bright Morning tinges the nigrescent sky hope emerges in my mind's eye.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 11/23/2008 6:15:00 AM
A lovely poem to start my morning! Very hopeful and inspirational! ~ Carrie
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Date: 11/23/2008 5:45:00 AM
Good morning. Another beautiful morning, especially reading your poetry. I am hopeful too. Love, Shar
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Date: 11/23/2008 4:07:00 AM
Wakey , wakey !!!! , to another Sir Brian day of poetic eloquence .... ( Won't mention the Springboks nightmare )
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Date: 11/23/2008 2:47:00 AM
Hope is a wonderful thing, and what better a place to find it than upon the new day's horizon...beautiful sequence my friend, love Kristin
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Date: 11/23/2008 2:20:00 AM
Great progression through these Crystallines, Brian. Love the nigrescent sky! Best wishes, Nigel
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