Brian Strand Poet Crystalline

Sequence Dawn

Sunrise ripples across the lake
confusions surface as I awake

Amid the eerie dayspring light
yesterday's memories glow so bright

Morning tinges the nigrescent sky
hope emerges in my mind's eye.

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Carrie Richards November 23, 2008 at 6:15 AM A lovely poem to start my morning! Very hopeful and inspirational! ~ Carrie

Sharon Winter November 23, 2008 at 5:45 AM Good morning. Another beautiful morning, especially reading your poetry. I am hopeful too. Love, Shar

Sean Kelly November 23, 2008 at 4:07 AM Wakey , wakey !!!! , to another Sir Brian day of poetic eloquence .... ( Won't mention the Springboks nightmare )

Kristin Reynolds November 23, 2008 at 2:47 AM Hope is a wonderful thing, and what better a place to find it than upon the new day's horizon...beautiful sequence my friend, love Kristin

Nigel Fawcett November 23, 2008 at 2:20 AM Great progression through these Crystallines, Brian. Love the nigrescent sky! Best wishes, Nigel