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Sequence

You always placed one before two And dwelled in that logic Over battlefields of dying dreams Forgoing the charge of atmosphere To make ion and scion attach in seams Of your weaving, scheming plunder. I now place two before one And use my two eyes to discern your graft To steer clear of your attraction That would sequence to three And thus count "out" and prelude the fall Of my battle-torn, tender heart of wonder.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 7/7/2009 11:07:00 AM
You simply rock woman. Do continue to write and post so we can see more of you. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/4/2009 6:22:00 AM
Interesting use of imagery for a thought provoking poem. Creative perspective. Thank you for sharing this one with us and for your kind comment. Have a good day! Karen
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