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Sequel To Hollow Commenting

My words are pert and curt and right in right that's hurt give them space or get disgraced I am infallible do not come around my poems give me my medicine and send me on pace. If you do, I am teeth gnash and bare take it bad like a scum hurled here I may be wrong but you have no right to get in my sight pick my mistakes and that shaded light because if you do so I will ask you to keep away from my works and give me back my dork and if you persist I will resist through an ignore hurt ass yeah! take the spite! wherever the rotten vermin enters she sends the scare knowing that she is on fry entering any commenting club she is shy if she is allowed in ignorance her ego runs on mayhem and everybody is soon on dare she is a nerd that is hard to shake a critique that is impervious to her faults which she simply cannot hear or make a corrective take. A self conceited nerd that is fermenting in self crowned glory of artistic and linguistic perfection-where the foul smell of self conceit precedes her by miles.Many smirk a nose at the pariaah and outcaste.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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