"septembers Pearl"

Passing through this cardio ghettos carbon life

Touching tawnies matrix of perennial painted times....

Escaping now unto a passage forged afore my sight

Matinees in brilliant shining omni light as this 

A morning boulevards tranquility sunrise ~

Tracing trails upon the walls within its wake

Sapient calling from such peaceful depths 

Deep inside, vitrifications resolve; chains disolved amid

Freedoms reflective blue sky glass....

Chandeliers which glitter beyond the mundane 

Ushering in Shangrilas sweetened dreams ~ 

More precious this Shepherdess than that of, a priceless 

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...."Septembers Pearl"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Devonshire Avatar
January 18, 2011 at 1:30 PM
I like the transition from the mundane "carbon life" to the brilliant world that lies beyond. Reading this poem is almost like stepping into heaven for a brief glimpse, John. Beautifully written! And thank you for your sweet comments on my haiku. Love, Carolyn
Brown Avatar
January 18, 2011 at 11:18 AM
John you have the most wonderful heart dear friend. Thank you again for your always kind comments. Love, Carol
Brown Avatar
January 17, 2011 at 12:13 PM
I am stopping by today to thank you for your kind comments John. It is always a pleasure to read your wonderful poetry. Love, Carol
Anderson Avatar
January 16, 2011 at 12:58 PM
Very nice poem...Jimmy
Haick Avatar
January 15, 2011 at 4:54 PM
LOL!!! "Cardio ghetto carbon life"!! You're too much John Rhinem... If I'm interpreting this correctly, I am happy that all is well; the chains disolved away! Beautiful! Even if your name wasn't on this page it would still scream, "John" Have a very good evening, my friend. Love, Annalise
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January 15, 2011 at 4:22 PM
simply stunning and beautiful...love 'freedoms reflective blue sky glass'... september is my birth month ~ smile ~
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